Narrative writing

Fisherman and fishwoman

                One upon time, there was a handsome man. His namewas eric. He liked fishing. One day he caught a fish. He was suprised to find out that it could talk. The fish begged him to be take a home. He was really happy. At home the fish turned into a beautiful woman. She attracted eric so much. He felt in love with that fish- woman. The woman wanted to marry him and said that eric had to keep the secret which she had been a fish. Eric aggred and promised that he would never tell any body about it.

                Eric had a verry nasty dad. His father didn’t like the wife of eric. So in the early morning, eric’s father was maked a criminal with manner gived the poison to eric’s wife. Then effects eric found his love was laying dead. With a cup of poison in her hand. He was cried. Then eric was looked for his father and asked “what did you do to my wife?” eric’s father replied with a laugh “hahaha, I killed your wife because i  really didn’t like her and I know your secret”. Eric was angry to hear it and then immidiately hitted his father until he lyed on the flour. He didn’t know that had killed his own father. He cried and went back to find his died wife. Eric was speechless. He regretted what had happened and then he said in his heart “why did all this happen! I love my wife, but why my father didn’t that. Oh god help me”.

                Eric thought very garbled, then the bad though was out. Eric look the poison beside his wife then he drank it. Eric had followed his wife because he thought nothing else, he could do in this world without people he cared.